Review: When the Sparrow Falls

Rarely do I read dystopian fiction anymore. It’s hard to read those stories as democracy comes under assault, but when I do, I remember why I like dystopian fiction. These stories bring up important questions about us as humans. Dystopian fiction asks what does it mean to live under authoritarian regimes. The answer is often fatalism. Humans accept it. We resist in small ways, but we also have to survive. Dystopian fiction asks is merely surviving actually living. At the beginning of When the Sparrow Falls, Neil Sharpson’s main character is just surviving day-to-day. But when given a dangerous assignment that brings someone from his past to him, his memories show him living a life that’s more than just work. Will he wake up and resist or simply survive?

Disclaimer: The publisher provided a copy of this book on NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. Any and all opinions that follow are mine alone.

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TL;DR

The gritty world of Neil Sharpson’s When the Sparrow Falls stayed with me long after I finished. This dystopian thriller is highly recommended to SF and mystery fans.

Review: When the Sparrow Falls by Neil Sharpson
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From the Publisher

Life in the Caspian Republic has taught Agent Nikolai South two rules. Trust No One. And work just hard enough not to make enemies.
Here, in the last sanctuary for the dying embers of the human race in a world run by artificial intelligence, if you stray from the path – your life is forfeit. But when a Party propagandist is killed – and is discovered as a “machine” – he’s given a new mission: chaperone the widow, Lily, who has arrived to claim her husband’s remains.
But when South sees that she, the first “machine” ever allowed into the country, bears an uncanny resemblance to his late wife, he’s thrown into a maelstrom of betrayal, murder, and conspiracy that may bring down the Republic for good.

WHEN THE SPARROW FALLS illuminates authoritarianism, complicity, and identity in the digital age, in a page turning, darkly-funny, frightening and touching story that recalls Philip K. Dick, John le Carré and Kurt Vonnegut in equal measure.

Review: When the Sparrow Falls by Neil Sharpson

State Security Agent Nikolai South has lived most of his life by keeping his head down and avoiding notice. He attends the minimum number of party meetings; he doesn’t pursue promotion opportunities. He’s content working as a low level agent. On an assignment to check out a suspected CONTRAN (short for Conscienceness Transfer), he and his partner find two bodies as the women underwent the illegal procedure. The Caspian Republic styles itself as the final bastion for ‘natural’ humans. There is no artificial intelligence to control life; there aren’t even smartphones. Outside the Caspian Republic, three super AIs have taken over for humanity, and the problem of transferring human conscienceness has been solved. Humans can now join AIs in post-singularity electronic worlds. But the thought of this is revolting to the people of the Caspian Republic, even Agent South.

Upon the death of one of the Caspian Republic’s most famous propaganda writer, the government learns that he was a ‘machine.’ This writer was an AI in a human body, who had come to the Caspian Republic for unknown reasons. The writer’s widow is given special dispensation to come to the Caspian Republic to identify him. Agent South is given the assignment of escorting her and determining if she’s a spy. South finds himself exactly opposite of what he wants; he’s in the eyes of powerful government officials and being watched by State Security’s nemesis, Party Security. When the widow shows up looking exactly like his late wife, his loyalty will be tested. His beliefs will be tested, and South’s afraid he’ll sacrifice all for the machine that looks like his wife.

When the Sparrow Falls was an atmospheric story. It reminded me of the stories about Soviet Russia. The Caspian Republic is an authoritarian state beset by sanctions from and technologically behind the rest of the world. Everyone is afraid of the state, even those doing the thug work of the state. People are starving; people are afraid. Outside the republic, people are living much better lives and living potentially forever in a post-singularity world.

Sharpson has written an excellent noir story set in a horrifying society. The main mystery, what was an AI doing in a society opposed to its being, is supported by little mysteries throughout the story that add up to something very interesting. This story embodies the saying that the journey is better than the destination. While the solves mostly satisfied, following South through this repressed society was fantastic. As I read, I felt the same oppressive air as South. Sharpson portrayed the Caspian Republic’s stoicism in such a way as to make Russians proud.

Fallen

Agent South carries the novel, as is necessary for a first person perspective. He has the noir detectives fault of wanting to do the wrong thing but having to do the right thing. He’s not one for grand gestures of resistance, but he does engage in kindness here and there. In the beginning of the novel, he warns a man to run even though it could cost South his freedom. In reality, Nikolai isn’t living, though. He’s just going through the motions that look like life. South never got over the death of his wife. Their relationship, which it would be generous to call it rocky, scarred him for life. Throughout the novel, she’s never far from his mind. How could she be with the AI he’s protecting looking exactly like her?

But what defined South was his determination and stubbornness. Even while guarding the AI, he’s still thinking about and interested in the CONTRAN case from the beginning. He may not want to pursue the case but he can’t help but be curious. His worn down realism about the Caspian Republic means he knows imprisonment or death follows any wrong step; yet, he still sticks his nose in where he shouldn’t. He still talks to the ‘machine’ even though she may corrupt him.

Sweet Surrender

Nikolai is the main character, and the Caspian Republic is the biggest supporting character. The reader will learn about it, its history, its politics, and, even, the dirty secrets it tries to hide. Nikolai isn’t exactly a patriot, and his cynicism regarding his country feels earned. Through him, we get to see how and why the Caspian Republic exists in a world dominated by AIs. All the other characters aren’t given much time, but through each of them, we see the world sketched without Nikolai’s personal biases. It’s excellent world-building.

One of the interesting things about this world is the role of philosophers and journalists in maintaining the status quo, in perpetuating the propaganda. It says a lot about how media shapes a society, which is then undercut by no one in society believing the media. But Sharpson doesn’t leave it at this simple of a portrayal. The book opens with the hanging of a writer, beloved by the state, because of his betrayal. He did the worst thing a state-sponsored propagandist can do, he publicly changed his mind.

Building a Mystery

I love when science fiction mixes with mystery. It may be my favorite subgenre of sci fi. Solving the mystery drives the story, but it’s not why we read these stories. We prefer stories with interesting characters that reveal information in a way that keeps us glued to the page. I’ve heard that the main character should be one step behind the reader in solving the mystery. I don’t think this is true because I enjoy mysteries where I don’t really know how they will be solved. But I want them to be solved in a way that is satisfying. Sharpson does that with most mysteries. There’s one mystery that I’m not sure I understand the answer to it. If what I think is correct, it’s unsatisfying; so, I prefer to think I don’t understand the answer. In the end, my nitpick is small and a personal preference. Other readers will disagree with me, and that’s great.

Conclusion

Neil Sharpson’s When the Sparrow Falls is an excellent dystopian thriller. Agent South and the world-building are wonderful. Despite the Caspian Republic being a horrible place, I looked forward to returning to it each time I picked up the book.

When the Sparrow Falls by Neil Sharpson is available from Tor Books on June 29th, 2021. © PrimmLife.com 2021

7 out of 10!