Review: The Nightmare Man

For half a year now, I’ve been learning to bake bread. It’s an amazing journey that I never thought I’d like as much as I do. The best thing about it is its simplicity. Right now, I use three ingredients: flour, water, and salt. That’s it. I have a sourdough starter that pulls yeast from the environment to give my bread the rise. I love it. What I’ve found, though, is that people mistake simple for easy and simple for dull. Neither is the case. Something made with care, with time, and with good craft can produce depths that are unexpected. The Nightmare Man by J.H. Markert made me think of artisanal bread because the story seems crafted with the utmost care. But more than that, Markert selected quality ingredients, starting with his characters. The whole story is driven by character, and while we’re learning about these people, we’re also advancing the story. At the heart of Markert’s characters are family secrets causing modern day trauma. These simple elements make a story with depth and with heart. But don’t be fooled; simple doesn’t mean easy; it doesn’t mean dull. It means a solid, entertaining story that will keep you glued to the page. I’m not sure if artisanal horror stories are a thing, but I’m gonna say this is one.

Disclaimer: The publisher provided a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Any and all opinions that follow are mine alone.

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TL;DR

The Nightmare Man by J.H. Markert entertains through engaging characters exploring the effects of their past on the present. A cop tries to find a killer who is recreating the murders from an author’s book. Highly recommended.

Review: The Nightmare Man by J.H. Markert - Cover image: A scarecrow amongst ripe corn reaches towards the reader against a read background. The lower third of the cover looks like a ripped book cover with the text underneath and written in red over the text is the author's name, J.H. Markert
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From the Publisher

T. Kingfisher meets Cassandra Khaw in a chilling horror novel that illustrates the fine line between humanity and monstrosity.

Blackwood mansion looms, surrounded by nightmare pines, atop the hill over the small town of Crooked Tree. Ben Bookman, bestselling novelist and heir to the Blackwood estate, spent a weekend at the ancestral home to finish writing his latest horror novel, The Scarecrow. Now, on the eve of the book’s release, the terrible story within begins to unfold in real life.

Detective Mills arrives at the scene of a gruesome murder: a family butchered and bundled inside cocoons stitched from corn husks, and hung from the rafters of a barn, eerily mirroring the opening of Bookman’s latest novel. When another family is killed in a similar manner, Mills, along with his daughter, rookie detective Samantha Blue, is determined to find the link to the book—and the killer—before the story reaches its chilling climax.

As the series of “Scarecrow crimes” continues to mirror the book, Ben quickly becomes the prime suspect. He can’t remember much from the night he finished writing the novel, but he knows he wrote it in The Atrium, his grandfather’s forbidden room full of numbered books. Thousands of books. Books without words.

As Ben digs deep into Blackwood’s history he learns he may have triggered a release of something trapped long ago—and it won’t stop with the horrors buried within the pages of his book.

Review: The Nightmare Man by J.H. Markert

Detective Winchester Mills and author Ben Bookman have met before when Ben’s brother disappeared as a young kid. Now, they’re meeting again as murder victims are found posed in the exact same way as described in Ben Bookman’s newest novel. Mills, and his daughter detective Samantha Blue, find the victims hung inside corn husk cocoons. During a signing, a man who accuses Bookman of “stealing his nightmares” commits suicide in front of Bookman and the entire store. This drives Bookman to drink; after all, who wouldn’t be traumatized by witnessing and being blamed for a suicide? The drinking strains his already fracturing marriage with pregnant wife, Amanda. As a reporter, Amanda is sidelined during one of the most important stories of the year; as a woman, she’s freaked out by the erratic nature of her husband. She sends their daughter, Briana, to her parents while this is all being sorted out. Naturally, Bookman is a suspect in the killings, but Mills and Blue don’t have enough to arrest him. However, they know he’s hiding something from them. But that shouldn’t be a shocker; everyone in this book is hiding something from everyone else. Mills from Blue, Blue from Mills, etc. As Mills and Blue investigate, they see more and more connections to all the insane crimes that Mills has investigated in his career. Meanwhile Ben tries to clear his name and save his marriage while learning that family secrets may just be the key to it all.

The Nightmare Man by J.H. Markert is a third person point of view novel that switches between Mills, Bookman, and a dreamlike view of past incidents. It is a deeply character focused novel with horror and speculative elements attached. Markert keeps a tight pace that engages the reader. This book isn’t pushing any narrative or structural boundaries. It’s just a good story, well told. I was glued to the pages from start to finish.

Detective Mills and Ben Bookman

Winchester ‘Winny’ Mills is a great character. He’s a surly, insightful, old man. Mills is a widower who still loves his wife; he even still plays Uno with her memory. Like everyone in this novel, he has his own secrets. His bedroom ceiling is covered with dreamcatchers. Mills suffers from nightmares, but more than that, he can take nightmares from people through touch. The detective is a bit of a cliche, but because Markert has invested so much in the character, he’s believable. Mills gets the most character work in the novel, and I looked forward most to his chapters.

Ben Bookman has a lot of character insight given, but I don’t know that I can say much about who he is as a person now. His backstory fuels the plot as much as his writing. I think readers get more about who he was as a child than we do about who he is today. We learn that he’s a good dad; we learn that he wants to keep his marriage, but he doesn’t act on it until possibly too late. The thing is, I’m not sure I mind. Ben changes quite a bit throughout the story. There are major revelations that would spoil the book if I commented on them. So, I will just say that Ben has one of the more interesting character journeys that I’ve seen in a while.

Mills and Bookman have a history together. Mills investigated the disappearance of Bookman’s younger brother. So, a lot of the character work on Bookman is given to us from Mills point of view. I liked this set up because some of Mills thoughts were validated and others weren’t. It shows that when cops make up their mind, it rarely changes without overwhelming evidence. Mills and Bookman’s interactions were fun. While seeming to work at cross purposes, they both seek the truth of what’s happening. Mills goes about it in a legal way; Bookman looks to be covering something up. It’s a fascinating duo.

Criticisms

I enjoyed The Nightmare Man by J.H. Markert. It’s a solid and entertaining horror story. That said, it has some things that bothered me. There’s implied sexual assault that was kind of left hanging out without any resolution. The speculative parts of the horror novel are a bit too subtle in the first part of the book; it was jarring as they ramp up in the second half. I liked the speculative elements; it just feels like they went into overdrive in the second half.

The ending was my least favorite part of the book. The mastermind behind everything bothered me. This person wasn’t unbelievable as the BIG BAD; the book just says that it can’t be that person. Then boom it’s that person. While the book goes to pains to show that the characters aren’t operating with 100% correct information, I don’t think enough hints were dropped early on to suspect who it was.

Now, this could entirely be a me problem. I know that. Remember reviews are subjective and based on personal experience. Maybe I missed the clues that Markert set out. If you thought it was set up excellently, please, drop a comment below to let me know.

Conclusion

J.H. Markert’s The Nightmare Man is a solid and entertaining horror story. The characters and their past drive the action. Let me tell you, it’s a hell of a ride to be on. The Nightmare Man is the first novel I finished in 2023, and it set the bar high for all the novels to follow. It was a fun, fast read that had me glued to the page. If you like books that have you reading just one more page, just one more chapter before bedtime, this is the book for you. Highly recommended.

The Nightmare Man by J.H. Markert is available from Crooked Lane Books on January 10th, 2023.

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7.5 out of 10!